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Sorry this is all I have to show after this long of animating... I suck yeah..
Well I'm not really proud of this or anything, just glad I can move on to the rest of the series
Credit to the spriters, KaijuKing, TheGuy07, AJ Nitro, Dimentio44, Brawlfan1, Shadefalcon, Shadow624, Kevin, Legendtony980 and Luigi-1.
I hope I didn't forget to credit anyone else but just tell me if i missed you
Music- Sonic 2006- Solaris Phase 2
This is a tribute to Nintendo's awesome Super Mario series and I do not claim to own any of the characters
Thanks for watching

Oh and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give critiscm, especially constructive
Don't just say cool, say what you honestly think of it
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Rashuanu Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Honestly, it lagged a few moments where nothing was happening, but's still betterr than anything I could do. Also, atthe end the music keeps going, but the vid sops. I would fix that.
But still, it was really good

Also, did you use flash?
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RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ahh I made this before I had any idea how to use a preloader, which stops things from lagging. I only learnt about preloaders like a few weeks ago but they've managed to stop animations from lagging.
Oh yeah the end was a little strange to get working, that was the only way it would let me do it without the whole flash looping from the beginning, i'm looking at a way to get that fixed! Thanks for the advice!!
And yes it was made in Flash CS5 :)
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Zack-the-dark Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
Just Put the preloader in the first frame of the whole animation :)
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tajdjd Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
just epic
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks!
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Nonononomo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Comming the Koopa Bros ?
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
If you mean are the Koopa Bros in this then the answer is no
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FlamingInfernoX Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
cool!!!!!!!
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endergirl05 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
omg cooll!!!!!!!1111ONE
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:icontheamazingnsixtyfour:
This intro...WAS...AMAZINGLY AWESOME x10!~ :iconwowplz::wow::iconwowplz:
You did a EPIC job my friend. :iconoooohplz:
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
woah thanks man!
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Phenometron Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
This intro is AWESOME!
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks!
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um-okay Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
i've been meaning to comment on this and I'd like to say wowe Chris I cna't even make a button on fglash you did reall;y good I hate trying to use flash if you can tolerate this youaer a true human
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RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks :D
Glad you like it
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:iconum-okay:
um-okay Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
you're welcome uwu
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:iconzoneaeris:
ZoneAeris Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
hm.... it could use a lot of work, especially with alignment, speed, and effects used. I could help you in your sprite animation journey.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey thanks! Could you tell me more about what you think needs improving? I really want to improve at this :P
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:iconzoneaeris:
ZoneAeris Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
well, generally.

You have misalignment problems. And resizing problems.

One quick and easy way to do this. Is, never to resize an original sprite. ever. never ever. just don't do it, unless you know what you're going for, but that'll come later in your animation journey. (stuff like post reansitions, and other things. Learn what "resizing" and "Skewing" means.) But NEVER EVER initially resize a sprite to make it bigger or smaller.

An, to follow that up, have an "Alignment Line" layer for all of your standing sprites. If you need to, put alignment lines ALL OVER THE PLACE! trust me, it WILL help. These lines will act as your floor, your ceiling (If you so choose to.) your walls, ANYTHING that has a restriction. Don't let a sprite past the boundaries of these alignment lines, and they usually go on the very surface of the floor/ceiling/walls (unless it's a 3d sprite, in that case you can improvise with resizing ( but learn what it means first.))

uh...Speeding up the animation. FIRST of, make sure you're animating at around 25 fps, or 30 fps. ANYTHING under 25 is... well...It's really, really dumb. If you animated this at 12 fps, then I can see where you went wrong, but I'm telling you how to fix it here and now.

Hm what else... uh....

The intro itself was nice, and i look forward to the series. Just, please tell me the plotline isn't something stupid, and you're good there.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the advice :)

I'm working on the plot to make it as good as I can so I hope it doesn't turn out stupid
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:iconzoneaeris:
ZoneAeris Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ahah, alright. You're welcome.

Sorry if I sounded harsh in any way, btw.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's fine, you didn't really :P
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:iconzoneaeris:
ZoneAeris Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
kgood. keep going~
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powerupj Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
this is awesome :D
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks man
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NintendoGamer5000 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds like a good story. I noticed that Geno looks like he's in a paper form, rather than a doll form.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Glad you like it!
Yeah that was the only sprites I could find of him so I thought it would look ok
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cooingkooky Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Love the music,what is it?
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's called Solaris Phase 2 from Sonic the Hedgehog 2006
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:iconcooingkooky:
cooingkooky Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
I am amazed by how good this animation and I've always wondered how to make animations.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow thankyou :D
you need adobe flash to be able to do it :)
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Snickers2829 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man, this is very interesting! I especially loved how you put all of the time and effort into something that would put the viewers on the edge of their seats! However, some of the areas of the intro came from the YouTube series Super Mario Bros. Heroes of the Stars, is it okay if you make the theme a bit different? Other than that, it would be perfect! This just really made my day!!
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Ok, I'll try, I never noticed that to be honest, what parts are you talking about?
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Snickers2829 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No offense, but those parts kind of rip off Heroes of the Stars. It will most likely be fine, though you might want to ask permission first. It's okay, though.
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RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Which parts?
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:iconsnickers2829:
Snickers2829 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The title, basically. Actually, I'd say the rest is okay. Is it okay if you change some of the font and textures of the title.
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh the title logo thingy was actually made by kaijuking (the creator of heroes of the stars) he made it for me because he wanted to :P
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minecart323 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If I were to have to describe this video in 2 words: HOLY SHIT
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
in a good way or bad way? XD
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:iconminecart323:
minecart323 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good all the way
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Lucario501 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
I think this is like amazing!!!! It would take me like 10 years just to do this xD :dance:
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow thankyou! Glad you liked it!
Lol, i doubt it would take that long XD
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:iconlucario501:
Lucario501 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Probably not but it would take me forever XD
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MarioVSLuigi9 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
awsome!!!!!
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks!
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MarioVSLuigi9 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
you're welcome
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:iconmarshchoco:
marshchoco Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student General Artist
i wish i knew how to animate >.<
aboslutely love it :D
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:iconrosalinasama:
RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thankyou :D
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Tyoka42 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is bloody awsome and you have obiously worked hard,
I just want to find out if theres more, yanow.. story allready written or stuff :meow:
not demanding tho, just if there happens to be
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RosalinaSama Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow, thanks so much :)
Well i actually have written the prolouge, episode 1 and half of episode 2 already!
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